I did some early story tweaking,taking some of my early bits and shifting them so it’s more like emails Emma’s sent from work. She has a new buddy named teslamomma (all I know is the woman does costuming and has given Dance sackout room in the past, and recently decided he’s cute) and teslamomma appears to be passing fairly esoteric info to Maxwell Bennie [ETA to change name] for Auren Han [ETA to change name]. I have no idea what else teslamomma does or looks like.
More needs doing on the early story bits for Life at Home and Boring is Good, must tackle later.
I shifted Car Talk to fit in after Have you Got Your Water Bottles and before Surveillance. It’s a shift made to fit a comment fo Ema’s about Dance getting overheated. Which shows up later as possibly the first sign he’s got that tail going..
I LIKE the e-mail/meme format. Very clever and amusing.