Notes for Lucas
*where did his centipede go?
*Hubby’s suggestion,his talent would be incredibly useful onboard spaceship, where he’d track the harmonics of the metals and know where things are fatiguing etc.
*He might be able to correct the viola’s harmonics while dance is playing it, holding onto one string or more…
during the whole viola sequence, does Dance feel like he has control over his tail? We aren’t quite in his head a lot of the time. Do we want to go more omniscent, or do part from Barret’s POV?
Thoughts for Drin’s PTSD
Remembering the general in more detail, (kinda Patton-ish, huh?)
remembering giving the order to shut down cryo facility, and commanding the workers that take out the dead Kiplings
remembering a battle with Kiplings leashed and then let loose
find and replace; “fully developed bagheera” not “full blooded”
Emma sneers at “Potty mouth” goes shakesperean
Lucas’ centipede may have run amok for a few moments, no longer than a minute. A few people might have felt like there was a moth flying around or something. Then it doesn’t have enough energy to sustain itself and it sort of dissipates.
Other thoughts and theories are welcome, though, if you have something in mind.