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just read viola over on google

and omigod you guys! *hands you roses*

At first, i was reading with an editor’s eye, especially the bits i already knew. fixing spelling and tenses, deleting adverbs, you know. But about halfway through Steve’s section, i just… couldn’t put it down. I read past my lunch break.

The question of Lucas getting kicked out; It does make sense now, that the grownups would want him gone, Pen especially would insist. But if we can keep him there… child in peril, yanno, it gives good story.

dance’s tail changing colors– we’ve seen tiny bits of that in previous sections, I’m wondering if it actually could do such silly things without dance’s specifically concious input. Those colors are rather sophisticated culturally, would it have such a thing yet? It acts pretty instinctive right now.

omigod, it’s good stuff!

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