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Adjusted timeline

I’ve gone through and re-worked The Frog Prince and Hurricane Princess to better reflect the timing of the eye and other stuff. My description of the OTHER eyewall is much paler than NV’s great tornado cell-eyewall on the other side, but that can be fixed.

Edit at will, of course. I’m reaching here.

3 thoughts on “Adjusted timeline”

  1. Dance and Stella, don’t I wish! X-D

    IS there an outline of the rest of this scene? Can the rest of us see? It helps with foreshadowing and such…

  2. There may *also* be later tornado cells, as I understand it, they don’t have to be synchronous with the hurricane’s eyewall. They’re likely to be close to it. I’m thinking that what Dance and Stella hit, when they go out the window, may not be quite that bad, but well up on that order.

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